I would have liked to have been able to spend a little more time and fine tune my paper. I feel that if i would have had more time to elaborate on my topic.
I feel like that those two are good concerns and I agree with that. Your paper in general had good ideas and flowed very well however you just need to proofread and possibly elaborate and clarify in some areas.
I feel like that those two are good concerns and I agree with that. Your paper in general had good ideas and flowed very well however you just need to proofread and possibly elaborate and clarify in some areas.
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